Comments received on poems by Writingismything



Loves Extinction
FredPeyer said:

Another very good poem, A!
I think one of the problems today is that people want too much too fast. Enjoy first, pay later.
Real love does exist. I am married for over 40 years and we still are in love together. Sometimes just holding hands gives me a thrill. Check out my poem \'Empathy\' and you will know what I mean.
So don\'t give up and take your time. You can fall in love overnight, but the real love takes time to develop. This from an old guy who has been around for a while. It does not make me smarter, but experience is recognizing a mistake the second time you make it. :-)

September 26th, 2017 00:19

Step by Step
FredPeyer said:

A, I just love these short line poems. Two words only on each line, perfect! Perfect rhyme too. Kudos!

September 26th, 2017 00:14

Cared left and forgotten
FredPeyer said:

Well written A., straight from the heart. I am so sorry for your loss and I do hope that you will not judge all of mankind based on one experience. Love does exist and you will find it on your own time!

September 26th, 2017 00:11

Step by Step
T... said:

Beautifully written

September 24th, 2017 23:54

Got to Move On
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 21st, 2017 17:22

Got to Move On
FredPeyer said:

Writing should be your thing! It is not easy to express deep feelings and then make them rhyme. But you have gift. Use it!

June 21st, 2017 13:09

Got to Move On
Magic Maker said:

Its great to use experience in writing. It turns the horrible into beautiful and it helps people learn. It can help you learn. John is a stepping stone to someone better. Believe it! If not, write it into existence.

June 21st, 2017 02:10

Cared left and forgotten
NikitaPassmore said:

I love this it shows so much emotion how much you really cared for a person but didn\'t love you back one bit

June 20th, 2017 23:28