Comments received on poems by ThisVivian



My Future
myself and me said:

Wish you the best in college, and good luck with your future.

August 11th, 2017 22:27

Alone
onepauly said:

a poem that deserves a reward.
it will come.

July 30th, 2017 02:24

Today\'s Panic Attack
FredPeyer said:

Had to look up Encephalitis on the net before being able to comment.
Panic attacks are not funny, and neither is your disease. I hope you get good treatment and hopefully it will get better over time.

July 30th, 2017 01:48

My Amazing Family
FredPeyer said:

What a beautiful declaration of love for one\'s own family. My wife is Chinese and family is very important to us as well, so I understand where you are coming from.

July 30th, 2017 01:40

Alone
FredPeyer said:

Very well written Vivian! I love your poem, except for the second to last line. Anybody who can write like this is NOT a loser!
You might want to check out my poem with the same title \'Alone\' I published on July 15th.
Am looking forward to read more from you.

July 30th, 2017 01:37

Today\'s Panic Attack
ummbree said:

This is beautiful!

July 23rd, 2017 17:48

Today\'s Panic Attack
orchidee said:

A fine write V.

July 23rd, 2017 01:27

Today\'s Panic Attack
Tris Eaton said:

Sad, but a very good poem. Nice job

July 23rd, 2017 00:58

Today\'s Panic Attack
Seek said:

I sincerely hope that your father does not read this. Another panic attack you can do without :)
Wonderful!

July 23rd, 2017 00:41

Today\'s Panic Attack
ummbree said:

This is beautiful!

July 23rd, 2017 00:13

My Two Funny Cuties
FredPeyer said:

Your poem is so well written, I can just see the two of them. Good job!

June 29th, 2017 14:35

How I Had a Panic Attack Today
Christina8 said:

Very nice poem! I agree with DS that this is wonderful! Oh panic attacks are the worst, aren\'t they?

June 27th, 2017 00:45

“Your” for “You’re”?!
Louis Gibbs said:

Excellent and well needed lesson in the language! Kudos, Vivian!

June 25th, 2017 23:40

“Your” for “You’re”?!
malubotelho said:

Smart saying. Love it.

June 25th, 2017 21:29