Comments received on poems by D\'anna-Mae Holness
Puppets of Society
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANNA~ MAE You show a deep understanding of how \"Society\" can suck innocent Teens (especially Females) into an increasingly morbid morality ! Each verse describes their descent into an amoral abyss where they ultimately lose control !
1. Innocence penetrated 2. Point of no return 3. Pressed into the mould 4. Already in too deep ~ distress 5. Her life was not what she expected 6. Controlled ~ broken ~ destroyed 7. Shattered ~ reduced to a \"Puppet on Strings\" 8. Her Life now Empty ~ Are we ever warned about the Terms and Conditions ? TRAGEDY !
ANNA ~ This is an elegantly penned poem ~ but the contents made me weep for today\'s Teens ! Every Blessing ~ BRIAN (UK)
June 30th, 2017 14:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANNA~ MAE You show a deep understanding of how \"Society\" can suck innocent Teens (especially Females) into an increasingly morbid morality ! Each verse describes their descent into an amoral abyss where they ultimately lose control !
1. Innocence penetrated 2. Point of no return 3. Pressed into the mould 4. Already in too deep ~ distress 5. Her life was not what she expected 6. Controlled ~ broken ~ destroyed 7. Shattered ~ reduced to a \"Puppet on Strings\" 8. Her Life now Empty ~ Are we ever warned about the Terms and Conditions ? TRAGEDY !
ANNA ~ This is an elegantly penned poem ~ but the contents made me weep for today\'s Teens ! Every Blessing ~ BRIAN (UK)
June 30th, 2017 14:33
