Comments received on poems by ForeverAW
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FredPeyer said:
Raw, emotional, and to the point. Good writing, sounds as if written by somebody much older. What can I say, you are very good a writing, not so good in choosing your lover. Just a little bit of advise from a guy who has been around the block a few times. Try to get out before it gets worse!
July 3rd, 2017 18:40
FredPeyer said:
Raw, emotional, and to the point. Good writing, sounds as if written by somebody much older. What can I say, you are very good a writing, not so good in choosing your lover. Just a little bit of advise from a guy who has been around the block a few times. Try to get out before it gets worse!
July 3rd, 2017 18:40
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burning-embers said:
Addicts are in love with their addiction. That love can turn to hating their addiction. Wotever condition you \'lover\' is in, you\'re not his love. Your writing is immediate and illustrative. Very strong. Awful subject crying off my screen. More please.
July 3rd, 2017 06:10
burning-embers said:
Addicts are in love with their addiction. That love can turn to hating their addiction. Wotever condition you \'lover\' is in, you\'re not his love. Your writing is immediate and illustrative. Very strong. Awful subject crying off my screen. More please.
July 3rd, 2017 06:10
