Comments received on poems by kmerc1
One Year
UnspokenVoice92 said:
A reunion of thoughts.. sometimes are more unforgiving then the actual set of events. Fantastic
September 13th, 2017 14:59
UnspokenVoice92 said:
A reunion of thoughts.. sometimes are more unforgiving then the actual set of events. Fantastic
September 13th, 2017 14:59
You Won\'t Know
FredPeyer said:
Ah, for God\'s sake, tell em!!!
Seriously, I like the way you structured this poem with the repetitive \"You won\'t know\". Hope you forgive me, but to me it sounds a bit like a soap opera (in a good way). A bit long, but you drew me in and I just had to keep on reading. Good writing! Life is a drag sometimes, isn\'t it?
Come to think of it, why don\'t you print it out and mail it to your lover/friend/partner and see what happens. Can\'t get worse.
July 6th, 2017 16:19
FredPeyer said:
Ah, for God\'s sake, tell em!!!
Seriously, I like the way you structured this poem with the repetitive \"You won\'t know\". Hope you forgive me, but to me it sounds a bit like a soap opera (in a good way). A bit long, but you drew me in and I just had to keep on reading. Good writing! Life is a drag sometimes, isn\'t it?
Come to think of it, why don\'t you print it out and mail it to your lover/friend/partner and see what happens. Can\'t get worse.
July 6th, 2017 16:19
You Won\'t Know
Nicholas Browning said:
You should tell this person all of this. Indeed, it is sad. It\'s emotion in raw form. Don\'t let it be so empty, deliver it to the person that you wrote it for. You\'ll feel much better if you do.
July 6th, 2017 09:49
Nicholas Browning said:
You should tell this person all of this. Indeed, it is sad. It\'s emotion in raw form. Don\'t let it be so empty, deliver it to the person that you wrote it for. You\'ll feel much better if you do.
July 6th, 2017 09:49
You Won\'t Know
burning-embers said:
You know what - i loved it. I didn\'t think i was gong to, jeez its a bit long, but i did. There\'s honesty for you. I didn\'t sleep last nite and maybe i\'m a bit dozy but \'you wont know this\' is hypnotic, almost like a mantra drawing me into a state of aaaarrrrrgggghhh i dunno what. If i were to offer you any advice it would be, stay away from ppl who aren\'t completely available. Yer writings just fine, exhausting, but fine.
July 6th, 2017 08:06
burning-embers said:
You know what - i loved it. I didn\'t think i was gong to, jeez its a bit long, but i did. There\'s honesty for you. I didn\'t sleep last nite and maybe i\'m a bit dozy but \'you wont know this\' is hypnotic, almost like a mantra drawing me into a state of aaaarrrrrgggghhh i dunno what. If i were to offer you any advice it would be, stay away from ppl who aren\'t completely available. Yer writings just fine, exhausting, but fine.
July 6th, 2017 08:06
