Comments received on poems by M. Mohon
Final Visitation
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Dude you let the demon win out in the end! That is sad indeed. Why so many people write about suicide is beyond me. There is so much to live for even after the big fall that, sooner or later, we all go through. I am anti suicide poems my friend and so I won\'t attempt to glamorize this poem. Write another where you kick the living crap out every single last one of those demons and I\'ll be right their painting your flow, your rhythm, your diction, with the highest of accolades. And check out NAMI if you\'re really hurting my friend. At least you ended the poem in truth - the devil laughing all the way to hell with the soul he stole.
July 10th, 2017 21:59
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Dude you let the demon win out in the end! That is sad indeed. Why so many people write about suicide is beyond me. There is so much to live for even after the big fall that, sooner or later, we all go through. I am anti suicide poems my friend and so I won\'t attempt to glamorize this poem. Write another where you kick the living crap out every single last one of those demons and I\'ll be right their painting your flow, your rhythm, your diction, with the highest of accolades. And check out NAMI if you\'re really hurting my friend. At least you ended the poem in truth - the devil laughing all the way to hell with the soul he stole.
July 10th, 2017 21:59
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