Comments received on poems by M. Mohon
Got Any Rope?
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
Gon should know, his ancestors were roping Native Americans from day one before they progressed to stealing and roping people from Africa.
June 21st, 2018 05:17
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
Gon should know, his ancestors were roping Native Americans from day one before they progressed to stealing and roping people from Africa.
June 21st, 2018 05:17
Got Any Rope?
Noah Malice said:
Give any one species too much rope and they\'ll fuck it up
June 20th, 2018 23:27
Noah Malice said:
Give any one species too much rope and they\'ll fuck it up
June 20th, 2018 23:27
Distant Train
DeviLove said:
We all dream of this happy place. But does it really exist on Earth? I don\'t think so.
October 7th, 2017 11:50
DeviLove said:
We all dream of this happy place. But does it really exist on Earth? I don\'t think so.
October 7th, 2017 11:50
Hidden In Plain Sight
ajithraj said:
An evil confession, lol
nicely put together
August 1st, 2017 13:40
ajithraj said:
An evil confession, lol
nicely put together
August 1st, 2017 13:40
This Tattoo
charlesbarrett said:
Great piece. Very expressive of who you are and where you’ve been. Tattoos are a great way to express yourself, and judging by your words, I’d guess it’s some great ink you wear. Thanks for sharing
July 23rd, 2017 21:45
charlesbarrett said:
Great piece. Very expressive of who you are and where you’ve been. Tattoos are a great way to express yourself, and judging by your words, I’d guess it’s some great ink you wear. Thanks for sharing
July 23rd, 2017 21:45
The Sandcastle
kevin browne said:
let\'s get the beach straight away. I love building castles in the sand and scribbling big hearts was a favourite too. love this.
July 20th, 2017 01:16
kevin browne said:
let\'s get the beach straight away. I love building castles in the sand and scribbling big hearts was a favourite too. love this.
July 20th, 2017 01:16
I Wish I Didn\'t Care
Q said:
Powerful indeed. It is true that you can never truly hate someone until you\'ve loved them first.
July 18th, 2017 07:59
Q said:
Powerful indeed. It is true that you can never truly hate someone until you\'ve loved them first.
July 18th, 2017 07:59
I Wish I Didn\'t Care
burning-embers said:
Great outpouring of anger. Aimed at self or a friend there is validity. Im guessing the last verses \'a load for four\' refers to pall bearers - those who carry a coffin. Good stuff, does he know how you feel?
July 18th, 2017 04:39
burning-embers said:
Great outpouring of anger. Aimed at self or a friend there is validity. Im guessing the last verses \'a load for four\' refers to pall bearers - those who carry a coffin. Good stuff, does he know how you feel?
July 18th, 2017 04:39
I Wish I Didn\'t Care
Its Raskolnikov said:
You love them but are mad, makes sense, I\'ve been there
July 18th, 2017 01:27
Its Raskolnikov said:
You love them but are mad, makes sense, I\'ve been there
July 18th, 2017 01:27
I Wish I Didn\'t Care
Lost at the beginning said:
So much frustration and passion, although I don\'t understand the last 2 lines of the last stanza. Overall I love this poem, the passion just screams at you. Very good writing.
July 18th, 2017 01:10
Lost at the beginning said:
So much frustration and passion, although I don\'t understand the last 2 lines of the last stanza. Overall I love this poem, the passion just screams at you. Very good writing.
July 18th, 2017 01:10
For The Reader
burning-embers said:
Love it, but i would suggest one improvement to ease your workflow. Use a word processor, so much easier and less messy.
July 17th, 2017 10:59
burning-embers said:
Love it, but i would suggest one improvement to ease your workflow. Use a word processor, so much easier and less messy.
July 17th, 2017 10:59
For The Reader
Goldfinch60 said:
I think you have put into words that which most of us feel. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 08:13
Goldfinch60 said:
I think you have put into words that which most of us feel. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 08:13
For Papa (Thank You)
Michael Edwards said:
Must admit it made my eyes water - superb write in what I would call conversational English - thanks for posting such an honest and captivating poem.
July 17th, 2017 03:44
Michael Edwards said:
Must admit it made my eyes water - superb write in what I would call conversational English - thanks for posting such an honest and captivating poem.
July 17th, 2017 03:44
For Papa (Thank You)
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m at a loss for words at the moment. This is sad, but strangely inspiring me to read it again. You\'ve made me feel like I\'d work those fields too. Well done, and thanks for this. Happy writing sir!
July 16th, 2017 00:48
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m at a loss for words at the moment. This is sad, but strangely inspiring me to read it again. You\'ve made me feel like I\'d work those fields too. Well done, and thanks for this. Happy writing sir!
July 16th, 2017 00:48
One Hundred Miles In Fifteen Feet
burning-embers said:
I really like this very much. I like your repeated line and the novelty of the meaning of that line. I strongly suggest you think about making a song out of this idea i think the \'buy line\' or \'hook\' is very strong indeed. If you\'re not musical then find a musician you can trust and work with them. +favs
July 15th, 2017 07:34
burning-embers said:
I really like this very much. I like your repeated line and the novelty of the meaning of that line. I strongly suggest you think about making a song out of this idea i think the \'buy line\' or \'hook\' is very strong indeed. If you\'re not musical then find a musician you can trust and work with them. +favs
July 15th, 2017 07:34
One Hundred Miles In Fifteen Feet
FredPeyer said:
M. this is one of the sweetest poems I have read. The last stanza just floored me. It was totally unexpected. Thank you for a great write!
July 15th, 2017 03:52
FredPeyer said:
M. this is one of the sweetest poems I have read. The last stanza just floored me. It was totally unexpected. Thank you for a great write!
July 15th, 2017 03:52
One Hundred Miles In Fifteen Feet
Nicholas Browning said:
This hits hard man. Holy crap. I feel it, like a brick just struck my head. It\'s lovely work, and I\'m sure everything will work out in the end. If you love each other truly, it\'s hard to let it go. Bravo.
July 15th, 2017 01:02
Nicholas Browning said:
This hits hard man. Holy crap. I feel it, like a brick just struck my head. It\'s lovely work, and I\'m sure everything will work out in the end. If you love each other truly, it\'s hard to let it go. Bravo.
July 15th, 2017 01:02
It\'s So Quiet Now
myself and me said:
I felt the ache in your heart, the emptiness in your mind. The quiet surround you, drained you, engulf you. Once you are out of it, you are reborn. May the song \"Un-break my heart\" by Toni Braxton soothe your heart.
July 14th, 2017 12:10
myself and me said:
I felt the ache in your heart, the emptiness in your mind. The quiet surround you, drained you, engulf you. Once you are out of it, you are reborn. May the song \"Un-break my heart\" by Toni Braxton soothe your heart.
July 14th, 2017 12:10
It\'s So Quiet Now
burning-embers said:
Yes this is a well penned piece. I interpreted this as the gal u loved upset you with her obvious memory of a previous lover which led to tension between u and she walked. Nicely penned story. Vivid pictures.
July 13th, 2017 18:12
burning-embers said:
Yes this is a well penned piece. I interpreted this as the gal u loved upset you with her obvious memory of a previous lover which led to tension between u and she walked. Nicely penned story. Vivid pictures.
July 13th, 2017 18:12
It\'s So Quiet Now
kevin browne said:
sounded really brilliant to me. I felt every emotion you wrote about as I read each line.
July 13th, 2017 18:01
kevin browne said:
sounded really brilliant to me. I felt every emotion you wrote about as I read each line.
July 13th, 2017 18:01
It\'s So Quiet Now
FredPeyer said:
Tsukasa, I like it, a well written and rhymed poem. It is tough being rejected when trying hard to be comforting. But some people just don\'t get it, or need a long time to realize the truth.
July 13th, 2017 14:49
FredPeyer said:
Tsukasa, I like it, a well written and rhymed poem. It is tough being rejected when trying hard to be comforting. But some people just don\'t get it, or need a long time to realize the truth.
July 13th, 2017 14:49
No Answers
burning-embers said:
I\'ve known the feeling you express here and you convey it well. It\'s a feeling i dont want repeated.
July 11th, 2017 17:31
burning-embers said:
I\'ve known the feeling you express here and you convey it well. It\'s a feeling i dont want repeated.
July 11th, 2017 17:31
No Answers
Nicholas Browning said:
If I had a heart, it would have just broken. This is raw dread, hope that\'s been crushed. I know how it feels. Thank you for sharing, I know it wasn\'t easy. Good work, and best of luck.
July 11th, 2017 16:43
Nicholas Browning said:
If I had a heart, it would have just broken. This is raw dread, hope that\'s been crushed. I know how it feels. Thank you for sharing, I know it wasn\'t easy. Good work, and best of luck.
July 11th, 2017 16:43
Final Visitation
Migithehp said:
i love it.
yes its dark but its deep
you can feel the pain the struggle and tiredness. you almost wanna jump in and yell dont do it! i loved it it gives a sense of what you think about when you are at the end of your rope and ready to fall.
July 11th, 2017 14:45
Migithehp said:
i love it.
yes its dark but its deep
you can feel the pain the struggle and tiredness. you almost wanna jump in and yell dont do it! i loved it it gives a sense of what you think about when you are at the end of your rope and ready to fall.
July 11th, 2017 14:45
Final Visitation
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Sorry no safe spaces or trigger warnings here T. There will be suck-ups and sycophants galore who will tell you what you want to hear, no-doubt all the while watching their own point count rise. The world is like that today. But you won\'t find a lone one of them consoling your mother, father, brothers, sisters, friends, teachers when your good and dead for taking your own life bro. I gave my life to Christ and he gives me all the help I need. I live to tell others that they can do the same.
July 11th, 2017 09:05
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Sorry no safe spaces or trigger warnings here T. There will be suck-ups and sycophants galore who will tell you what you want to hear, no-doubt all the while watching their own point count rise. The world is like that today. But you won\'t find a lone one of them consoling your mother, father, brothers, sisters, friends, teachers when your good and dead for taking your own life bro. I gave my life to Christ and he gives me all the help I need. I live to tell others that they can do the same.
July 11th, 2017 09:05
Final Visitation
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to this site Tsukasa!
While your poem might be a little bit (or a lot) on the dark side, your writing is definitely on the bright side. Keep it up and publish some more. Can\'t wait to read it.
July 11th, 2017 03:57
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to this site Tsukasa!
While your poem might be a little bit (or a lot) on the dark side, your writing is definitely on the bright side. Keep it up and publish some more. Can\'t wait to read it.
July 11th, 2017 03:57
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