Comments received on poems by J.W Coleman



This is Goodbye
Jinx said:

Well done.

August 23rd, 2017 04:21

This is Goodbye
Nicholas Browning said:

This almost made me cry. I thought about my father when I read this, and it was tugging at the heart strings. May all be well with your life, and I hope things are better now. Well written, and a great expression of emotion. Well done.

July 16th, 2017 01:00

Midnight Thoughts
myself and me said:

the sadness with no cause, the cloud mind with no clue, the tight heart with no control. Depression, without experiencing it, you won\'t understand it. You do not need to be fixed. you need to be healed by love. Open yourself up to someone you trust completely.

July 14th, 2017 12:29

Midnight Thoughts
kevin browne said:

great write my friend. it took me to a places in my mind so it caught my attention. I feel for you and remember to keep the light on.

July 14th, 2017 00:59

Desolate Dreams
Heather T said:

Your words pierce skin and beg for oblivion. Pristine pain explored.

July 13th, 2017 17:19

If I Hit Low Again
Jinx said:

This is you? That\'s great!.... \'when the day threatens me with my burning regrets\'... Beautiful line


July 12th, 2017 15:34