Comments received on poems by SimoneAllen
Words.
burning-embers said:
Ouch! baby. This is a brilliant write. You gave me your pain in this i felt for you. No huge rant from you here, no outpouring filling my page and boring me. What you\'ve done is chosen just the right amount of words and lines to sock me right in the guts. Really good writing.
July 15th, 2017 07:53
burning-embers said:
Ouch! baby. This is a brilliant write. You gave me your pain in this i felt for you. No huge rant from you here, no outpouring filling my page and boring me. What you\'ve done is chosen just the right amount of words and lines to sock me right in the guts. Really good writing.
July 15th, 2017 07:53
Words.
Nicholas Browning said:
This is some brutal stuff. I\'ve been here before, you have my heartfelt empathy. People like that are better off having nothing. Persevere! You\'ll make it.
July 15th, 2017 00:52
Nicholas Browning said:
This is some brutal stuff. I\'ve been here before, you have my heartfelt empathy. People like that are better off having nothing. Persevere! You\'ll make it.
July 15th, 2017 00:52
Words.
Poetic Misfit said:
That is very deep. I can relate to your poem on a personal level
July 15th, 2017 00:43
Poetic Misfit said:
That is very deep. I can relate to your poem on a personal level
July 15th, 2017 00:43
Wounded
Lost Girl said:
You are not worthless, trust me some might not think it by how I carry myself but I have low self-esteem so low it can barely be seen... I went through years of bullying and I survived, I was wounded and I don’t think the scars of bullying will ever fade but I survived! And that’s a lot to say... I made it and so will you... a lot of the time life seems hard and like you have nothing but you’ll always have something... it might be something small so small that it’s barely seen but you’ll have it and no matter how small it is it’s always better than nothing... I’m always here as a friend if u need me
- Faith
July 14th, 2017 01:38
Lost Girl said:
You are not worthless, trust me some might not think it by how I carry myself but I have low self-esteem so low it can barely be seen... I went through years of bullying and I survived, I was wounded and I don’t think the scars of bullying will ever fade but I survived! And that’s a lot to say... I made it and so will you... a lot of the time life seems hard and like you have nothing but you’ll always have something... it might be something small so small that it’s barely seen but you’ll have it and no matter how small it is it’s always better than nothing... I’m always here as a friend if u need me
- Faith
July 14th, 2017 01:38
