Comments received on poems by sammy4ever1995
Reflection
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent plea and beautifully rhymed. It'd look better with the lines aligned than just as a paragraph, if I might suggest? Ah, we can only ask for mercy and then try when we have the opportunity, to remember to give mercy. Beautiful tribute to that horrible reality!
October 22nd, 2011 22:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent plea and beautifully rhymed. It'd look better with the lines aligned than just as a paragraph, if I might suggest? Ah, we can only ask for mercy and then try when we have the opportunity, to remember to give mercy. Beautiful tribute to that horrible reality!
October 22nd, 2011 22:56
cancer how
Dolphine29 said:
Ohh ... it is a feeling of realistic desperation. Very well done.
Best
V.
October 22nd, 2011 12:59
Dolphine29 said:
Ohh ... it is a feeling of realistic desperation. Very well done.
Best
V.
October 22nd, 2011 12:59
first love is like playing with fire
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent tribute to romantic love and that precious first love! Romantic love is forever like playing with fire, volatile, exciting, burning the hapless participants if it cannot consume them both in its passion's fury. Great imagery conveying the reality rather poignantly.
October 18th, 2011 14:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent tribute to romantic love and that precious first love! Romantic love is forever like playing with fire, volatile, exciting, burning the hapless participants if it cannot consume them both in its passion's fury. Great imagery conveying the reality rather poignantly.
October 18th, 2011 14:18
today
Cheeky Missy said:
What very sweet declaration of love! How delightful. It beautifully expresses the wonderful reality of love realized. I love it!
September 21st, 2011 13:32
Cheeky Missy said:
What very sweet declaration of love! How delightful. It beautifully expresses the wonderful reality of love realized. I love it!
September 21st, 2011 13:32
