Comments received on poems by M.m
Thoughts
Louis Gibbs said:
Welcome to MPS, M.m. You are off to a good start with this poem!
I would say, the best way to advance in your writing ability would be to study and observe the submittals on this site, as well as the comments about them. I look forward to your development in future submittals.
July 19th, 2017 16:15
Louis Gibbs said:
Welcome to MPS, M.m. You are off to a good start with this poem!
I would say, the best way to advance in your writing ability would be to study and observe the submittals on this site, as well as the comments about them. I look forward to your development in future submittals.
July 19th, 2017 16:15
Thoughts
burning-embers said:
This is gorgeous. You totally encapsulate the feeling and i know it only too well. You cannot help but have thoughts when the presence of somone awakens you, you realise theres that special attraction. If this is hapening to you right now then take my advice \"Tell her about it\" (song by Bllly Joel also) don\'t sit on it.
July 19th, 2017 13:11
burning-embers said:
This is gorgeous. You totally encapsulate the feeling and i know it only too well. You cannot help but have thoughts when the presence of somone awakens you, you realise theres that special attraction. If this is hapening to you right now then take my advice \"Tell her about it\" (song by Bllly Joel also) don\'t sit on it.
July 19th, 2017 13:11
