Comments received on poems by Cheltica
Rose
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
brilliant ! i love the layout of this piece, a great rhythm and beat .. loved it ! :-) a well written poem
February 27th, 2018 16:01
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
brilliant ! i love the layout of this piece, a great rhythm and beat .. loved it ! :-) a well written poem
February 27th, 2018 16:01
World Peace
Accidental Poet said:
A sad write but profound in it\'s delivery. Its as if God himself was the author. Well done Cheltica.
February 23rd, 2018 06:53
Accidental Poet said:
A sad write but profound in it\'s delivery. Its as if God himself was the author. Well done Cheltica.
February 23rd, 2018 06:53
Help Me
Christina8 said:
This is a great write. Brave of you to write it, but I think it helps others in your situation to read it. I remember being in this place before. It\'s heartbreaking. Just beyond words, really. Getting help is the frustrating part.Thanks for sharing your poem!
November 10th, 2017 18:06
Christina8 said:
This is a great write. Brave of you to write it, but I think it helps others in your situation to read it. I remember being in this place before. It\'s heartbreaking. Just beyond words, really. Getting help is the frustrating part.Thanks for sharing your poem!
November 10th, 2017 18:06
Ragdoll
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written and bold...I can relate to it in many ways being a flamboyantly dressed gay guy most of the time, but others in a suit and tie...mouths dropping all over ...looks that make no sense, or too much sense....but I can tell you one thing and that is to NEVER stop DOING YOU< BEING YOU< LIVING YOU.....ITS YOU who is living your LIFE and YOU WHOs actions or lack of create the changes that are VITAL to success....FUCK OTHER PEOPLE who don\'t get YOU, then they can go GET THEMSELVES first of all, and if and when that happens then they can get the fucK up off your case....IM sorry if people get offended at me using the word \"fuck\" here...I\'m not taling to them, I\'m talking to you...and this website is 18PLUS if I\'m not wrong....anyway ..sorry but I can REALLY relate to this piece and its BRILLIANT...NEVER hold back and keep on trucking girl! read some of my work..I have published 163 poems on this site and I have a feeling you might enjoy them...take care and keep writing!!
July 20th, 2017 06:32
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written and bold...I can relate to it in many ways being a flamboyantly dressed gay guy most of the time, but others in a suit and tie...mouths dropping all over ...looks that make no sense, or too much sense....but I can tell you one thing and that is to NEVER stop DOING YOU< BEING YOU< LIVING YOU.....ITS YOU who is living your LIFE and YOU WHOs actions or lack of create the changes that are VITAL to success....FUCK OTHER PEOPLE who don\'t get YOU, then they can go GET THEMSELVES first of all, and if and when that happens then they can get the fucK up off your case....IM sorry if people get offended at me using the word \"fuck\" here...I\'m not taling to them, I\'m talking to you...and this website is 18PLUS if I\'m not wrong....anyway ..sorry but I can REALLY relate to this piece and its BRILLIANT...NEVER hold back and keep on trucking girl! read some of my work..I have published 163 poems on this site and I have a feeling you might enjoy them...take care and keep writing!!
July 20th, 2017 06:32
My Monster
Cheltica said:
Thanks ya\'ll, I think that describing a serious mental illness in a way that is childlike can help teach others what it is like to have it. I don\'t mean to call others dumb, but it gives a new perspective.
July 20th, 2017 01:46
Cheltica said:
Thanks ya\'ll, I think that describing a serious mental illness in a way that is childlike can help teach others what it is like to have it. I don\'t mean to call others dumb, but it gives a new perspective.
July 20th, 2017 01:46
My Monster
kevin browne said:
wow, although your life appears to be sad and tough but underneath all that what you deal with just remember to think about how beautiful you are and fill yourself with the determination of a sergeant major who never loses a war. take good care of yourself and I can\'t wait to read more stuff from you with some positive thoughts about trying to get better. love to love.
July 19th, 2017 23:24
kevin browne said:
wow, although your life appears to be sad and tough but underneath all that what you deal with just remember to think about how beautiful you are and fill yourself with the determination of a sergeant major who never loses a war. take good care of yourself and I can\'t wait to read more stuff from you with some positive thoughts about trying to get better. love to love.
July 19th, 2017 23:24
