Comments received on poems by jaylee85



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orchidee said:

A fine write Jay. If at a stage of anger or frustration, you are concerned with wanting to do something about it. Even though it is \'fear of nothing, what does not exist\'.
The longer it goes on - not taking a step forward - the worse it may get, or just stay the same. I do it myself in a milder form, or rather don\'t do certain things because of fears.

March 16th, 2018 02:47

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FredPeyer said:

Welcome to MPS, Jaylee. There is so much emotion in your writing. Well done! You are right, smiles can hide a lot, and we all do it.

August 4th, 2017 21:24

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myself and me said:

Smile is hard, then cry it out. Sometimes, It is OK to be your true self without a musk. Well written poem.

August 4th, 2017 16:38

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JAYLEE ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! A Beautifully written \"free verse Poem\" throbbing with rhythm and angst which reflects the Subject !

SMILE though your heart is aching
SMILE though its nearly breaking
When there are clouds in the sky
You\'ll get by ~ if you Smile
Nat King Cole ~ You Tube

BUT (as you say) it is often a False Smile to hide a broken heart and a broken spirit.

Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

August 4th, 2017 09:24