Comments received on poems by Shortyb
The sea she came
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and as a first poem, excellent.
You said that you had no idea why it was about the sea, many poets feel the same they start to write and the words on the page seem to write themselves and we don;t know from where they came.
August 12th, 2017 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and as a first poem, excellent.
You said that you had no idea why it was about the sea, many poets feel the same they start to write and the words on the page seem to write themselves and we don;t know from where they came.
August 12th, 2017 00:30
The sea she came
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS shortyB! And what an entrance! Love your poem and would like to read more.
August 11th, 2017 21:46
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS shortyB! And what an entrance! Love your poem and would like to read more.
August 11th, 2017 21:46
The sea she came
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine introductory poem, Shorty. Keep then coming. Welcome to MPS!
August 11th, 2017 20:03
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine introductory poem, Shorty. Keep then coming. Welcome to MPS!
August 11th, 2017 20:03
