Comments received on poems by The Drunk Pirate
Human Nature
seeker123 said:
There is a beautiful synchronicity about this poem. I love the way you end every verse as well as the rhythm you use, and I especially like the last verse \"I am no one, with no name, a man without a face. I walk the earth and watch the world slowly go up in flames.\" Those are some powerful words.
August 21st, 2017 19:59
seeker123 said:
There is a beautiful synchronicity about this poem. I love the way you end every verse as well as the rhythm you use, and I especially like the last verse \"I am no one, with no name, a man without a face. I walk the earth and watch the world slowly go up in flames.\" Those are some powerful words.
August 21st, 2017 19:59
The ballerina
Goldfinch60 said:
May the door to your prison soon be opened. Good write.
August 17th, 2017 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
May the door to your prison soon be opened. Good write.
August 17th, 2017 00:41
The ballerina
FredPeyer said:
Drunk Pirate, you must have been completely sober when writing this beautiful piece of poetry! Kudos!
August 16th, 2017 11:14
FredPeyer said:
Drunk Pirate, you must have been completely sober when writing this beautiful piece of poetry! Kudos!
August 16th, 2017 11:14