Death of a Rose
hlaynes3 said:

I like the imagery and similes in this poem. I especially like the last line, comparing the loss of a young life to a flower that had picked too soon.

September 23rd, 2017 19:05

Wanting You....
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME BELLE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ it is beautiful ! It represents every Godly Lady\'s dream ! That GOD will send her a MAN who respects her desire to keep physically pure before her marriage. It is possible and in our Church we encourage all the Females to practice CHASTITY. We also teach that in the YMCA and in School programs ~ but Society preaches FREE LOVE and it is hard for TEENS (and older People) in any Country to fight against what is considered the norm (Sex before Marriage) in the 21st C. Every Blessing ~ Praying for you BRIAN (UK)

August 19th, 2017 14:50