Comments received on poems by Erin
Depression.
Fate said:
I build machines
I design industrial plants
When my family has a problem I fix it
I was raised to be able to work on/fix anything
That\'s how I\'m known
Why can\'t I fix me
I\'m not very big on poetry
I only write the things I dare not speak
But I really enjoyed reading how the world around you quote simple fixes to your feelings
I get the same thing
Meditate, medicate, etc.
Everyone around me gets joy from reading my poems but they don\'t understand that it\'s not poetry I\'m writing
December 11th, 2017 08:47
Fate said:
I build machines
I design industrial plants
When my family has a problem I fix it
I was raised to be able to work on/fix anything
That\'s how I\'m known
Why can\'t I fix me
I\'m not very big on poetry
I only write the things I dare not speak
But I really enjoyed reading how the world around you quote simple fixes to your feelings
I get the same thing
Meditate, medicate, etc.
Everyone around me gets joy from reading my poems but they don\'t understand that it\'s not poetry I\'m writing
December 11th, 2017 08:47
Depression.
myself and me said:
Suffer what you are suffering. Yes, your mind want to fight, but the body won\'t follow.
Do not give up, keep fighting, keep hoping til one day you find a way out.
Very well done.
August 31st, 2017 20:30
myself and me said:
Suffer what you are suffering. Yes, your mind want to fight, but the body won\'t follow.
Do not give up, keep fighting, keep hoping til one day you find a way out.
Very well done.
August 31st, 2017 20:30
Depression.
TN96 said:
This is brilliant! And in someways scarily relate-able! Welcome to MPS :)
August 31st, 2017 06:32
TN96 said:
This is brilliant! And in someways scarily relate-able! Welcome to MPS :)
August 31st, 2017 06:32
Depression.
Egyptianqt79 said:
I love her .....u talking bout Sabrina? U watch button poetry !!!!! She got me too! It\'s the way she says it. I love spoken poetry. I love ur poetry too ! U did amazing!!!!!!
August 31st, 2017 01:26
Egyptianqt79 said:
I love her .....u talking bout Sabrina? U watch button poetry !!!!! She got me too! It\'s the way she says it. I love spoken poetry. I love ur poetry too ! U did amazing!!!!!!
August 31st, 2017 01:26