Comments received on poems by alienkid
the dawning of grief
Heather T said:
Grief is absolutely this, with the world moving on around you and light-heartedness vacuumed out of the air. It\'s a slow eventual turning, but it does eventually turn. Even if you still limp. Truth telling write!
September 2nd, 2017 20:03
Heather T said:
Grief is absolutely this, with the world moving on around you and light-heartedness vacuumed out of the air. It\'s a slow eventual turning, but it does eventually turn. Even if you still limp. Truth telling write!
September 2nd, 2017 20:03
the dawning of grief
Accidental Poet said:
With the loss of loved ones, there is always another side to grief. You will be together again. ; )
September 2nd, 2017 17:59
Accidental Poet said:
With the loss of loved ones, there is always another side to grief. You will be together again. ; )
September 2nd, 2017 17:59
the dawning of grief
dusk arising said:
This is top notch stuff poet. That last verse is especially strong and oh so true. This is going into my favourites.
September 2nd, 2017 15:42
dusk arising said:
This is top notch stuff poet. That last verse is especially strong and oh so true. This is going into my favourites.
September 2nd, 2017 15:42
wandering (but never finding)
dusk arising said:
hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You\'ve shown yours in well written verse. lets see ore of it please, and please comment on some of other peoples writing on here - thats how it works - ppl commenting on each others work - if you dont do that you won\'t get many people commenting on yours it seems.
September 2nd, 2017 06:27
dusk arising said:
hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You\'ve shown yours in well written verse. lets see ore of it please, and please comment on some of other peoples writing on here - thats how it works - ppl commenting on each others work - if you dont do that you won\'t get many people commenting on yours it seems.
September 2nd, 2017 06:27
wandering (but never finding)
dusk arising said:
hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You\'ve shown yours in well written verse. lets see ore of it please, and please comment on some of other peoples writing on here - thats how it works - ppl commenting on each others work - if you dont do that you won\'t get many people commenting on yours it seems.
September 2nd, 2017 06:19
dusk arising said:
hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You\'ve shown yours in well written verse. lets see ore of it please, and please comment on some of other peoples writing on here - thats how it works - ppl commenting on each others work - if you dont do that you won\'t get many people commenting on yours it seems.
September 2nd, 2017 06:19
wandering (but never finding)
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! I hope you found writing to be cathartic and I also hope you\'ll write more for us to see. I think you did a great job. Thank you for sharing!
September 2nd, 2017 00:40
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! I hope you found writing to be cathartic and I also hope you\'ll write more for us to see. I think you did a great job. Thank you for sharing!
September 2nd, 2017 00:40
wandering (but never finding)
Frank Prem said:
Writing offers the prospect of someone reading you, and also the chance to do it again.
It seems the better option to me, but regardless, I wish you the best.
September 1st, 2017 23:56
Frank Prem said:
Writing offers the prospect of someone reading you, and also the chance to do it again.
It seems the better option to me, but regardless, I wish you the best.
September 1st, 2017 23:56
