Stranger in the Dark
Gary Edward Geraci said:

I\'m all for praying people...I count fourteen lines, the traditional number of lines for a sonnet. Your rhyme scheme (ababcdcdefefgg) is new to me but I\'m new to poetry. I don\'t believe in a rating system - maybe in a classroom - but not here. I used it just once to gently give a guy a taste of his own medicine (call it a fraternal correction if you will). This one seems to come from your heart and is part of getting your voice back. Welcome back.

September 8th, 2017 23:00