Comments received on poems by F.G. Franklin
Sunset Wine
Gary Edward Geraci said:
You aptly and colorfully describe the life that dominated a good thirty years of my own existence - even that elusive \"something\" (was it love?) surfaces in your poem - that elusive \"something\" that makes us want to do it all over again the following night - despite the previous morning\'s hangover. Though I caught the attention of a lot of women, I never did catch that elusuve \"something\", following the club and bar scene, and so the sun finally went down for me for good on this type of lifestyle. An honest, well written piece.
September 16th, 2017 15:10
Gary Edward Geraci said:
You aptly and colorfully describe the life that dominated a good thirty years of my own existence - even that elusive \"something\" (was it love?) surfaces in your poem - that elusive \"something\" that makes us want to do it all over again the following night - despite the previous morning\'s hangover. Though I caught the attention of a lot of women, I never did catch that elusuve \"something\", following the club and bar scene, and so the sun finally went down for me for good on this type of lifestyle. An honest, well written piece.
September 16th, 2017 15:10
For the Love of Night and Day
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:
Absolutely astonishing! Thank you for sharing this, it is truly inspirational. Keep up your hard work.
CR x
September 14th, 2017 18:46
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:
Absolutely astonishing! Thank you for sharing this, it is truly inspirational. Keep up your hard work.
CR x
September 14th, 2017 18:46
For the Love of Night and Day
w c said:
Thanks FG! I thoroughly enjoyed your song
September 14th, 2017 17:01
w c said:
Thanks FG! I thoroughly enjoyed your song
September 14th, 2017 17:01