Comments received on poems by JaynieJo
Confused and Crushed
AmandaJade said:
\"You said things that hurt me and I never said a word.
I was quiet as a mouse when I should have chirped like a bird.\"
You go girl!! Silence can truly be the most damaging... but I can tell that you have a beautiful soul. Great job love!
December 23rd, 2018 23:36
AmandaJade said:
\"You said things that hurt me and I never said a word.
I was quiet as a mouse when I should have chirped like a bird.\"
You go girl!! Silence can truly be the most damaging... but I can tell that you have a beautiful soul. Great job love!
December 23rd, 2018 23:36
Confused and Crushed
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI JAYNIE : Welcome to MPS ! Thanks for your first poem : full of energy & rhyme & rhythm ! But a very sad & tough message. I was 19 a few yeras ago and I know just how fickle Teen Boys can be. They take and then walk away (however nice we have been to them) leaving us sad. As GIRLS we are expected to get over these things and bounce back : but its not easy ! I am now engaged (for the first time) to Brian : who I share this site with. He is agreat GUY ! MPS is an empathetic site and you have had some very nice replies.
Every Blessing for the future : Yours ANGELA
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December 23rd, 2018 17:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI JAYNIE : Welcome to MPS ! Thanks for your first poem : full of energy & rhyme & rhythm ! But a very sad & tough message. I was 19 a few yeras ago and I know just how fickle Teen Boys can be. They take and then walk away (however nice we have been to them) leaving us sad. As GIRLS we are expected to get over these things and bounce back : but its not easy ! I am now engaged (for the first time) to Brian : who I share this site with. He is agreat GUY ! MPS is an empathetic site and you have had some very nice replies.
Every Blessing for the future : Yours ANGELA
Please check our site : thanks.
December 23rd, 2018 17:10
Confused and Crushed
Simon Bromley said:
Extremely well done. Felt your pain and frustration throughout.
December 23rd, 2018 12:58
Simon Bromley said:
Extremely well done. Felt your pain and frustration throughout.
December 23rd, 2018 12:58
