Comments received on poems by veil loreraven



Forever Lost *Senryu*
veil loreraven said:

hm, really. Never heard of Senryu. Looks like I have study time to do.

September 30th, 2017 01:01

Forever Lost *Senryu*
Christina8 said:

Beautiful senryu--Welcome to MPS!!
The saddest one I\'ve ever read!
Great job!

September 29th, 2017 06:38

Forever Lost *Senryu*
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write but strictly speaking this is a senryu.
Haikus refer to nature and seasons
Senryu to emotions.
Welcome to MPS

September 29th, 2017 02:18