Comments received on poems by Kate



The Incubus
FredPeyer said:

A very apt description of a dream or maybe even a nightmare, Nina! Well done!

November 7th, 2017 13:51

The Incubus
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI KATE ~ Please take care the INCUBUS has no respect for Ladies ~ Awake or Asleep ! Thanks for sharing your challenging POEM ~ scary ! I love SF ~ Cats (they are mystical !) and travelling especially in the USA ~ every state is like a different Planet ! We are praying for Texas ~ What state are you in ? ~ I\'ve added you as a Friend ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

November 7th, 2017 11:08

A Distant Shore
FredPeyer said:

What a beautiful poem, Nina.
We all like to have that \'magnificent heaven\', be it real or imaginary. A place to escape to when the pressures of life get to be too much.
Well penned!

October 12th, 2017 17:22

Daddy Problems
germanamericanchurch said:

Children get the shortend of the stick in war of the roses

October 6th, 2017 23:27

Daddy Problems
FredPeyer said:

Strong and true writing, but so sad. Abandoning a child is just about the worst thing a parent can do.

October 6th, 2017 13:06

Daddy Problems
Christina8 said:

This is such a tragic (saw that word just used but so fitting) write. I\'m so sorry you had to go through that. I hope in writing this it helps others. Thanks for sharing.

October 6th, 2017 09:35

Daddy Problems
lasergraph said:

Great write but tragic. It is a scene we all hate to see yet is is woven into our society like a blanket of despair. Thanks for your share.

October 6th, 2017 09:22

Floating Underwater
chinaaliciarivera said:

Lovely. Keep writing. 💗 💕 ❤ 😊

October 4th, 2017 16:26

Hallucinations uncovered by woman, in illustration
chinaaliciarivera said:

This is interesting. The ending is kind-of funny also, it made me chuckle. 💗 💕 ❤ 😊

October 4th, 2017 16:26

Hallucinations uncovered by woman, in illustration
FredPeyer said:

A very intriguing write, Kate, with an unexpected ending. Well written!

October 3rd, 2017 11:16

Floating Underwater
FredPeyer said:

Welcome to MPS, Kate! Beautiful poem, great choice of words, love your imagination! Who is she, indeed? Let\'s hope future writings will give some clues!

October 2nd, 2017 18:00