Comments received on poems by Hartless



The Ocean I Am
chinaaliciarivera said:

The spelling errors really take away from the beauty of this poem. Please use maybe microsoft word and use the spell check in the program or find spell checker online. Other than the errors. It seems to be a good write. The spelling errors kind of can confuse a thought and feeling you are trying to convey and it really takes away from the flow of the poem. ❤ 💗 💕 😊

October 3rd, 2017 22:19