Comments received on poems by Tamara Lancaster
THOSE days
MendedFences27 said:
O.K. I rather like this one. I see the dark first stanza as loneliness. The second stanza opposes the first with the joy of love shared and waking to a lover\'s face. But, as life rules, you are then separated and the loneliness returns as you miss them. I love the closing line about your eyes and how \" they miss you before my body can catch up.\" very original. All in all I would say very well done, an enjoyable write. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2017 14:43
MendedFences27 said:
O.K. I rather like this one. I see the dark first stanza as loneliness. The second stanza opposes the first with the joy of love shared and waking to a lover\'s face. But, as life rules, you are then separated and the loneliness returns as you miss them. I love the closing line about your eyes and how \" they miss you before my body can catch up.\" very original. All in all I would say very well done, an enjoyable write. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2017 14:43
