Comments received on poems by ivanpetryshyn
a poem about nothing
dusk arising said:
Don\'t bother with people who cant see writing beyond a formulae. Just write how you feel.
And you did that very well indeed, enjoyed reading you.
March 1st, 2020 12:17
dusk arising said:
Don\'t bother with people who cant see writing beyond a formulae. Just write how you feel.
And you did that very well indeed, enjoyed reading you.
March 1st, 2020 12:17
a poem about nothing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those flying words of your have landed wonderfully on this page.
Welcome to MPS.
March 1st, 2020 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those flying words of your have landed wonderfully on this page.
Welcome to MPS.
March 1st, 2020 02:24
a poem about nothing
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING IVAN ~ Welcome to MPS it is a proactive site ! Thanks for your first Poen ~ it is excatly what it says on the TIN ~ Nothing ! However it is after all a Poem !
1. Does it have a title ? YES !
2. Does it Rhyme ? YES ~ At least 6 times ~ good enough for MPS !
3. Does it have Rhythm ? YES every line
4. Doesit have a category ? YES ~ FANTASY
5. Does it make sense ? NO ~ It is a FANTASY
Well done IVAN you have passed the MPS ~ Five points TEST !
Welcome on Board the Good Ship MPS !
Please check our site ~ Thanks BRIAN & ANGELA (UK)
MPS operates by reading & commenting on each others POETRY ~ OK
February 29th, 2020 18:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING IVAN ~ Welcome to MPS it is a proactive site ! Thanks for your first Poen ~ it is excatly what it says on the TIN ~ Nothing ! However it is after all a Poem !
1. Does it have a title ? YES !
2. Does it Rhyme ? YES ~ At least 6 times ~ good enough for MPS !
3. Does it have Rhythm ? YES every line
4. Doesit have a category ? YES ~ FANTASY
5. Does it make sense ? NO ~ It is a FANTASY
Well done IVAN you have passed the MPS ~ Five points TEST !
Welcome on Board the Good Ship MPS !
Please check our site ~ Thanks BRIAN & ANGELA (UK)
MPS operates by reading & commenting on each others POETRY ~ OK
February 29th, 2020 18:27
