Comments received on poems by my_dialect
Foolish
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, x!
And you start out with a \'bang\'! Well written, great structure. I like how you use two different fonts to separate present from past. All in all a great poem with a lot of meaning in these four short lines!
October 31st, 2017 22:03
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, x!
And you start out with a \'bang\'! Well written, great structure. I like how you use two different fonts to separate present from past. All in all a great poem with a lot of meaning in these four short lines!
October 31st, 2017 22:03
Foolish
Masking said:
I love how it captures the essence of having love, but having not be able to share it. At least it\'s what it says to me. It\'s short and to the point and leaves elbow room to think, Good Job!
October 31st, 2017 20:12
Masking said:
I love how it captures the essence of having love, but having not be able to share it. At least it\'s what it says to me. It\'s short and to the point and leaves elbow room to think, Good Job!
October 31st, 2017 20:12
