Comments received on poems by JLL517



Reflection of hate
Anthony Stafford said:

Indeed

January 14th, 2018 15:47

Selfish
Luz Rivera said:

Love it

November 26th, 2017 07:15

Reflection of hate
FredPeyer said:

I really like your poem, Vic! Well written, like the repetitions and especially the unexpected last line!

November 22nd, 2017 13:03

Selfish
Jmcg said:

Unfortunately this is the world we live in today. Everyone is only out for self. Very awesome and truthful write.

November 21st, 2017 22:35

Selfish
FredPeyer said:

Love is all about giving, without expecting anything in return. When that giving, that love comes from both sides, everything is fine. If it is a one-way street, maybe it is time to move on. Well written, Vic!

November 17th, 2017 12:13

Selfish
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

November 17th, 2017 11:13

Selfish
Fay Slimm. said:

A compelling read and welcome to this friendly site - I smiled at your pseudonym by the way - - remembering the original Vic with nostalgic sighs.

November 17th, 2017 09:39

Selfish
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Welcome to MPS!
Very interesting pseudonym!
Liked the whole poem...
especially the last part!

November 17th, 2017 09:26

Selfish
PoeticPsycho said:

Damn this is a good poem

November 17th, 2017 01:57