Forty Minute Shower
Christina8 said:

As tepo said, hopefully not anytime!
This is an superb write, very emotive. Welcome to the site! Hope to see more of your poetry!

November 18th, 2017 18:08

Forty Minute Shower
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW LINDSAY ~ This is an awesome first poem ~ Perfectly balanced triplets and a Subject that is Bold but bad and Strong but Sad. The shower is (normally) a lonely place and there is always TIME to CONTEMPLATE ! Water drips ~ tears run ~ minutes fly ~ hand shakes ~ razor falls (I never shave in the shower in case the razor slips !) cry & cry ~ breath harder ~ stop & stare ~ look & think ~ NOT TODAY ! This is a wonderful Poem to recite and ~thankfully ~ all\'s well that ends well and not down the well (plughole) ! I trust this is theoretical and not actual ~ you are much to young and beautiful to die ~ and I know from experience the effect it has on Family & Friends ! Thanks for scaring ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

November 18th, 2017 15:43