Comments received on poems by tinathealien
Summer and Winter
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TINA ~ Thanks for your first poem which is well written and well spaced ~ a good poem has shape ! There is a paradox in your poem ! We know of the Baobab Tree as Africa\'s Tree of Life which stores water in its trunck and whose fruit is both delicious & nutritious ! BUT ~ Yours dies which is sad indeed. I love this poem there is a lot of imagery ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ UK
December 8th, 2017 18:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TINA ~ Thanks for your first poem which is well written and well spaced ~ a good poem has shape ! There is a paradox in your poem ! We know of the Baobab Tree as Africa\'s Tree of Life which stores water in its trunck and whose fruit is both delicious & nutritious ! BUT ~ Yours dies which is sad indeed. I love this poem there is a lot of imagery ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ UK
December 8th, 2017 18:50