Comments received on poems by Pia
Holding on
reverberate said:
Pia, thank you for your poetry, it touched my heart, and inspired this:
Dear Pia,
When holding on is wounded heart
and feeling failed before you start.
When holding on another day
begins and ends with your dismay.
Then holding on is letting go
of who you are and what you know.
Make this the moment of your birth
for you are made of more than earth.
Let that which is within you sing
It has no hands but only wings.
rick
December 14th, 2017 00:50
reverberate said:
Pia, thank you for your poetry, it touched my heart, and inspired this:
Dear Pia,
When holding on is wounded heart
and feeling failed before you start.
When holding on another day
begins and ends with your dismay.
Then holding on is letting go
of who you are and what you know.
Make this the moment of your birth
for you are made of more than earth.
Let that which is within you sing
It has no hands but only wings.
rick
December 14th, 2017 00:50
Holding on
ron parrish aka wordman said:
holding on ,i guess we all are in a sense
December 13th, 2017 19:48
ron parrish aka wordman said:
holding on ,i guess we all are in a sense
December 13th, 2017 19:48