Comments received on poems by midnight drive

What to do When You’re Alone Again
jarcher54 said:

I appreciate the line You won\'t forget her when you are dead. Suicide seems like a huge gesture, an earth-changing act, to the one contemplating it. But is the ultimate disempowerment, concession to one\'s nemesis, and by making oneself nothing one does nothing.

October 30th, 2020 02:05

Everyone has Demons.
FineB said:

Thanks Midnight Drive.

That was a good write.

We all have some element of darkness flowing us. However, for some the darkness outweighs any possible goodness in them.

Why do you think there is so much evil in the world?

Keep writing FineB.

March 20th, 2019 09:27

Everyone has Demons.
Nicholas Browning said:

Fear lives within all of us. How you deal with it will help define you.
Doubt is Fear\'s sister. She\'s a mean one too.
Nice write.

March 20th, 2019 03:35

Everyone has Demons.
Night Owl said:

Wow--Your first four lines just grabbed me...Good stuff!

March 19th, 2019 22:44

Father forgive me
orchidee said:

An interesting write. Why didn\'t Cam Smith try the normal door then? He would not have got caught up in the revolving door then! Should he have gone to Specsavers?! heehee.

August 6th, 2018 01:54

Poetic Dan said:

My friend your soul shines bright through this. Glad you took that second or third look at the inner reflection

August 5th, 2018 22:11

Father forgive me
Poetic Dan said:

Very powerful, thank you for the read as I sit back up after only a few hours sleep.

August 5th, 2018 22:06