Comments received on poems by vicky104

fallen tears

Thanks VICKY for another elegantly written poem straight from your aching heart. To some extent your Poignant Poem mirrors all our experiences in Life & Love ~ there are always highs & lows In Families ~ with Friends ~ in Relationships ~ at School ~ at Work and even at Play ! I am an optimist and always \"count my Blessings\" which always outweigh the negatives !\" MPS is a positive site and we are there for each other 24/7 People need People they CAN RELY ON ! Every Blessing BRIAN (UK)

December 21st, 2017 15:18

motherly love

WELCOME VICKY ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ WOW it is so dramatic and dynamic and the ending is BEAUTIFUL ! Love the \"free verse\" format and yet it throbs with (irregular) Rhyme and pulsates with Rhythm ~ easy to read & recite all hallmarks of an excellent Poem ! Seems like your Mum walked out when you were born and now you are a Poised Polished & Perfect 17 year old she wants you back in her life ! I expected you to tell her to \"GO TO H**L\" but NO ! \"i found what i was looking for ~ down in my core ~ where theres love ~ i can give and reseave finally ~ AMEN ! I\'m a Man ~ and twice your age ~ but it made me CRY ~ You are an ANGEL ~ Especially as I still have my MUM and she treated me with a velvet glove from the day I was born and still does ~ but I can empathise because I know how precious a 24/7 Mum (& Dad) is. Every Blessing ~ Thinking of You ~ Praying for You ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Thanks for sharing & caring ~ I trust you found it CATHARTIC.

December 19th, 2017 16:15