Comments received on poems by vermahl
Once upon an Addict
vermahl said:
Thank you guys. I know I was repetitive on a couple words but besides for that I believe it meshes well. I\'m learning that the older I get, making poems that rhyme sound less and less organic.
January 8th, 2018 07:38
vermahl said:
Thank you guys. I know I was repetitive on a couple words but besides for that I believe it meshes well. I\'m learning that the older I get, making poems that rhyme sound less and less organic.
January 8th, 2018 07:38
Praise the Glue
Syd said:
Raising $3000 for the local food bank is such a kind thing to do. You must be a kind, hardworking, professional human being.
- Syd
January 8th, 2018 05:27
Syd said:
Raising $3000 for the local food bank is such a kind thing to do. You must be a kind, hardworking, professional human being.
- Syd
January 8th, 2018 05:27
Once upon an Addict
Syd said:
Hi there vermahl, I really like this poem. You say it\'s not your best work but it\'s still really good. I can relate to it in some ways.
- Syd
January 8th, 2018 05:23
Syd said:
Hi there vermahl, I really like this poem. You say it\'s not your best work but it\'s still really good. I can relate to it in some ways.
- Syd
January 8th, 2018 05:23
Once upon an Addict
Anthony Stafford said:
A story that ends in many ways pain turned to curage extracted from the pain of loves disappointment motivation to elevate that to there next point of success not your best work but seems like a master pieace
January 8th, 2018 04:52
Anthony Stafford said:
A story that ends in many ways pain turned to curage extracted from the pain of loves disappointment motivation to elevate that to there next point of success not your best work but seems like a master pieace
January 8th, 2018 04:52
