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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the structure it pulsates with Rhyme & Rhythm ! The subject however is a little melancholy ! Longing to be someone we\'re NOT ~ more in touch with the Dead than the Living ~ these are phases we all pass through ~ BUT ~ in my experience however dark & dank the \"Tunnel of Life\" there has always been (so far) a light at the end ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

January 17th, 2018 04:02