Comments received on poems by EmmaLaurel



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EmmaLaurel said:

Thank you for your comments, this was the first poem I have published so good to have feedback

January 19th, 2018 16:02

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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

oh , i do love the reference to the fire of pain and the rotting apple, \'\' cradled by the cloak of love\'\' wow.. what great expression , what great wording , love this but its sad

January 19th, 2018 14:02

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Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 19th, 2018 13:09