Comments received on poems by DezareeCheyd
The One I Took For Granted
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello dezaree, i can feel your regrets and your hurt thoughout this writing , i truly love how you have spoken of yourself and her as magnets thousand of miles apart and yet still stuck together , i like the contrast here. i like how you have said , she can\'t get in , you can\'t get out, almost like you are both somehow stuck apart even tho you feel you are both meant to be together. i love the relation to fairytale . great piece of writing , enjoyed reading this
January 29th, 2018 04:48
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello dezaree, i can feel your regrets and your hurt thoughout this writing , i truly love how you have spoken of yourself and her as magnets thousand of miles apart and yet still stuck together , i like the contrast here. i like how you have said , she can\'t get in , you can\'t get out, almost like you are both somehow stuck apart even tho you feel you are both meant to be together. i love the relation to fairytale . great piece of writing , enjoyed reading this
January 29th, 2018 04:48
