Comments received on poems by Sandbone18



The Creed of Spring
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes Spring is so special

May 9th, 2018 00:42

Swooping to the Kill
onepauly said:

excellent!
you did it!

May 6th, 2018 11:47

Shatteted
SorrowfullyHappy said:

nicely written but just so you know the title is misspelled


May 5th, 2018 22:40

Shatteted
Noah said:

Nicely written

May 5th, 2018 21:34

Shatteted
onepauly said:

think positive!

May 5th, 2018 10:56

Disheartened
onepauly said:

prey and predator alike.

May 4th, 2018 10:33

Dreaming
onepauly said:

simple, a start

May 3rd, 2018 13:06

Reminiscing at the Playground
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, so many memories when you take your children to the park - they do return again - with the grandchildren.

April 30th, 2018 00:54

Reminiscing at the Playground
onepauly said:

it went right to my heart.

April 29th, 2018 16:38

What is the Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and surely very true that some do not consult their soul.

April 27th, 2018 00:24

What is the Soul
Caring dove said:

you speak some very true words :-) i liked this poem

April 26th, 2018 13:40

What is the Soul
Netashi said:

Very satisfying poem true to the very end.
-Theta

April 26th, 2018 12:47

Demon\\\\\\\'s Nostrils
AlexHoy said:

Good write

April 21st, 2018 11:10

The Masks
Lorna said:

Really thoughtful - maybe it\'s good that we can\'t see everything about people!!

March 9th, 2018 07:25

The Motion of Water
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write and thoughts, watching water is wonderful.

March 6th, 2018 01:54

Soaring
Lorna said:

I agree wholeheartedly! A celebration of freedom! I feed the birds every day just to watch them.........

March 3rd, 2018 04:56

Soaring
Caring dove said:

a lovely poem . i love birds and being able to watch them fly

March 3rd, 2018 04:11

When the Roots are Strong
w c said:

Great write S. Gardens are good.

March 1st, 2018 20:25

When the Roots are Strong
Lorna said:

Wow - loved this - true for gardens and people!

March 1st, 2018 02:54

Ice Water
Lorna said:

Very good! I see warriors needing water, I see the ocean...

February 27th, 2018 04:59

The Gardener
Lorna said:

Oh you got me with this! I put my garden to bed carefully a few months ago and snowdrops appeared yesterday!!! I absolutely can\'t wait to get back out there! Love that you are a gardener! \"Test the heartiness of the soul\" indeed! And watch out for Lyme Disease - I\'ve had it 4 times~!

February 26th, 2018 05:02

Night Wolves
Caring dove said:

hello sandbone .. i love this line..

Washing and wrestling through the defenseless leaves and branches.
Ripping with it\'s claws rendering no mercy.

an interesting poem with good words.

February 26th, 2018 04:34

The Gardener
Caring dove said:

a very pleasant and lovely read :-)

February 26th, 2018 03:14

The Gardener
orchidee said:

A fine write Sandbone.

February 26th, 2018 03:10

Toughness
b-LAH-que said:

An empowering poem, and a great first submission. Well done, keep on posting your work, I\'ll look forward to reading it.

February 18th, 2018 21:44