Comments received on poems by XxjulesxX
I’m Not Okay
Jamie said:
truthful and straightforward, real emotions, very relatable, great poem, Jules!
February 24th, 2018 12:09
Jamie said:
truthful and straightforward, real emotions, very relatable, great poem, Jules!
February 24th, 2018 12:09
I’m Not Okay
Birddie Jane said:
I really like your poem. This is from my poem help me
...You are so oblivious
And it makes me sad
That you don\'t look
When I give hints
A webpage left open
A poem written
Or song on repeat
I am not happy
I have not been happy
In a very long time
But i smile
And I laugh
Because you tell me too
My white flag
Waving in the shadows
Ignored
And alone
Why can\'t you see
That I am so broken
Lost and scared
Please
Open your eyes
See me
As I really am
Help me
February 22nd, 2018 02:23
Birddie Jane said:
I really like your poem. This is from my poem help me
...You are so oblivious
And it makes me sad
That you don\'t look
When I give hints
A webpage left open
A poem written
Or song on repeat
I am not happy
I have not been happy
In a very long time
But i smile
And I laugh
Because you tell me too
My white flag
Waving in the shadows
Ignored
And alone
Why can\'t you see
That I am so broken
Lost and scared
Please
Open your eyes
See me
As I really am
Help me
February 22nd, 2018 02:23
I’m Not Okay
themerrypapist said:
Your poem is beautiful. Don\'t forget that you\'re infinitely valuable, OK?
February 22nd, 2018 00:12
themerrypapist said:
Your poem is beautiful. Don\'t forget that you\'re infinitely valuable, OK?
February 22nd, 2018 00:12
I’m Not Okay
XxjulesxX said:
Tell me what you think about my poem please :)
February 21st, 2018 23:47
XxjulesxX said:
Tell me what you think about my poem please :)
February 21st, 2018 23:47
Why You Do the Things You Do
Jamie said:
Thanks for sharing this, I have several friends who will understand and appreciate it even more than I do.
February 20th, 2018 02:38
Jamie said:
Thanks for sharing this, I have several friends who will understand and appreciate it even more than I do.
February 20th, 2018 02:38