Comments received on poems by Jose Elias Ortiz
Life & Water
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello jose .. brilliant first entry ! i very much enjoyed reading this , your mention of waves crashing violently onto the beach , and the \'\' lake that exists if you can make it to shore\'\' .. sometimes we simply feel consumed by too many waves in life and we feel like we are sinking underneath a harsh depth which we struggle to escape from , other times like you said , the waves are gentle. i love your wording throughout this. nicely done !
March 5th, 2018 04:20
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello jose .. brilliant first entry ! i very much enjoyed reading this , your mention of waves crashing violently onto the beach , and the \'\' lake that exists if you can make it to shore\'\' .. sometimes we simply feel consumed by too many waves in life and we feel like we are sinking underneath a harsh depth which we struggle to escape from , other times like you said , the waves are gentle. i love your wording throughout this. nicely done !
March 5th, 2018 04:20
