Comments received on poems by malos



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Aislinn Wilson said:

The conclusion is very interesting

March 27th, 2018 11:10

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Lorna said:

Strong feelings in this poem........

March 27th, 2018 07:26

being human
Jeremy Cohen said:

I’m definitely with them^ the structure and simplicity is beautiful.

March 25th, 2018 19:22

being human
Lorna said:

Good one!!!! I\'m with Michael - I like the simplicity........

March 25th, 2018 05:12

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Michael Edwards said:

Do like the simplicity and structure of this.

March 25th, 2018 03:06

empty
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i felt like this last night. i can really relate to the feeling of emptiness, as ive had it a lot in my life, and it hurts! i can feel the pain throughout this , sorry you have to suffer with this .. but you expressed this so well , it sure is like you are losing yourself , aching for more, so sad

March 24th, 2018 03:42