Tears
L. B. Mek said:

pulsing: \'tones of Blue\'
that\'s an apt, categorisation
for our life\'s journeys I think
from that sky blue, we look up to
while traversing rivers, imbued
with clarity, of mesmeric blue
metaphoric imagery layered, all the way deep
to those melancholic saxophonist, Blue\'s
indeed, its all true..
(thanks for choosing to share
and inspiring my little scribbled reply, a meaningfully deep write)

September 23rd, 2021 04:39

Tonight
Goldfinch60 said:

May those polished diamonds be forever in your life.

Andy

April 28th, 2021 00:45

New Terrain
BLACKGOLDKING said:

I too love bounding over walls.
Great first write of many great works to come I sense.
Brilliant Work.

April 9th, 2018 20:42

New Terrain
sylviasearcher said:

I enjoyed your poem. Did you write it about yourself or someone/thing else or both.

I struggle with hopeful and salvation poems.

Perhaps inside I don\'t have enough faith for the words to emerge.

I like how it came to a sincere and hopeful ending.

April 9th, 2018 01:18