Comments received on poems by MARY Swillum
No Shoes on His Feet
onepauly said:
maybe we could get him some shoes.
good one.
April 28th, 2018 00:23
onepauly said:
maybe we could get him some shoes.
good one.
April 28th, 2018 00:23
No Shoes on His Feet
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and unfortunately these unfortunate people are increasing in numbers in a world where there is enough and more for everybody.
April 28th, 2018 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and unfortunately these unfortunate people are increasing in numbers in a world where there is enough and more for everybody.
April 28th, 2018 00:16
Lost Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I do hope that the ice is broken and the warmth of love returns.
April 27th, 2018 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I do hope that the ice is broken and the warmth of love returns.
April 27th, 2018 00:29
My Teddy Bear
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may your teddy bear always bring you pleasure.
April 4th, 2018 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may your teddy bear always bring you pleasure.
April 4th, 2018 01:00
Today is a Beautiful Day
Goldfinch60 said:
What a very good positive write. After reading this I now know that my day will be beautiful.
April 3rd, 2018 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
What a very good positive write. After reading this I now know that my day will be beautiful.
April 3rd, 2018 00:14
Today is a Beautiful Day
ron parrish aka wordman said:
on a beach just at dusk laying beside each other,a glass of wine,listening to the waves come in,taking it back to the house getting in the hot tub,lights low music soft wine chilled candles burning
April 2nd, 2018 22:32
ron parrish aka wordman said:
on a beach just at dusk laying beside each other,a glass of wine,listening to the waves come in,taking it back to the house getting in the hot tub,lights low music soft wine chilled candles burning
April 2nd, 2018 22:32
Today is a Beautiful Day
Lorna said:
Oh where are you! I mean what place! How I would love to be in that wonderful land of sea and sun right now! Delicious poem........
April 2nd, 2018 08:44
Lorna said:
Oh where are you! I mean what place! How I would love to be in that wonderful land of sea and sun right now! Delicious poem........
April 2nd, 2018 08:44
You Were the Reason
Clarita said:
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. It has taken me a while to acknowledge how grateful I am for the experience I once shared with my beloved Dork.
April 1st, 2018 23:26
Clarita said:
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. It has taken me a while to acknowledge how grateful I am for the experience I once shared with my beloved Dork.
April 1st, 2018 23:26
What Happen to the Music
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sad words,lost love is hard to deal with,man can relate
April 1st, 2018 10:55
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sad words,lost love is hard to deal with,man can relate
April 1st, 2018 10:55
What Happen to the Music
Goldfinch60 said:
That music will always be in your heart and soul. Good write and welcome to MPS.
April 1st, 2018 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That music will always be in your heart and soul. Good write and welcome to MPS.
April 1st, 2018 00:49
