Comments received on poems by ByCatieLight



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lasergraph said:

You told the story as it needed to be told. I hope not from first hand knowledge. It is a tragic story that is far too common. Gret job.

August 7th, 2018 08:31

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lasergraph said:

A sober view of a far too common problem. By shining light on it, maybe we can remove the blemish it has become.

July 19th, 2018 15:28

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JasmineUK said:

Applauding your courage,
To have broken your chains,
And wishing strength to extinguish,
The ghost that remains.

Wipe him from your mind,
Like the shit on your shoes,
Find your new romance.
Better aware of the cues.


July 19th, 2018 11:36

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Heartwriter said:

What gives another that right? Nothing! Sorry for what you endured. Rise above it and never look back. Not worth your good time of day! Excellent write.

July 19th, 2018 04:55

Empty Box
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

sad but so well written :-) \'\' another had your heart still in her hand \'\'

April 3rd, 2018 14:21

Empty Box
Lorna said:

Lovely Caitlin - and very sad. A \"real\" version of what love is sometimes....

April 3rd, 2018 05:57

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Ivory said:

I think we all have felt this way at times, and yes its easy. But facing those feeling and issues that consume us, make us stronger in the long run.
I do like how you expressed your self in this piece.

April 1st, 2018 20:51

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME CATIE ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ elegantly penned but a NUMB content ! We all feel like that sometimes NUMB an\\d only just holding out against the pressures of live. I\'ve found as I\'ve got older (30+) and wiser and more experienced and independent I am my \"Own Man\" and less numb and can withstand the pressures better ~ I live \"one Day at a Time\" and have a Lady Friend and a Faith which helps ! Every blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

April 1st, 2018 15:42