Comments received on poems by The_One_That_Got_Away
My druthers
The_One_That_Got_Away said:
https://allpoetry.com/Lee_Jay_Bresett
All my other work is here.
June 7th, 2018 14:23
The_One_That_Got_Away said:
https://allpoetry.com/Lee_Jay_Bresett
All my other work is here.
June 7th, 2018 14:23
Lost in Transaction
Jhe said:
Scary to think that you / the subject may have experienced so many negative interactions that the term \"Lost in transaction\" was warranted ~ it\'s very effective!
Regarding the \"tremble\" ~ was it a shudder of defeat, or a reluctance to let go of hope? / Does the subject really no longer care, or is their \'indifference\' only a shield and their \"blank expression\" a mask?
April 21st, 2018 19:17
Jhe said:
Scary to think that you / the subject may have experienced so many negative interactions that the term \"Lost in transaction\" was warranted ~ it\'s very effective!
Regarding the \"tremble\" ~ was it a shudder of defeat, or a reluctance to let go of hope? / Does the subject really no longer care, or is their \'indifference\' only a shield and their \"blank expression\" a mask?
April 21st, 2018 19:17
Silent as your happy
sylviasearcher said:
I wonder often if this kind of love exists outside of literature.
A beautiful painful poem.
April 11th, 2018 02:11
sylviasearcher said:
I wonder often if this kind of love exists outside of literature.
A beautiful painful poem.
April 11th, 2018 02:11
Lost in Transaction
Caring dove said:
interesting poem , i like the wording in this .. \'\' pain makes life run thin\'\' pain does nothing to help life.
April 3rd, 2018 14:17
Caring dove said:
interesting poem , i like the wording in this .. \'\' pain makes life run thin\'\' pain does nothing to help life.
April 3rd, 2018 14:17
