Comments received on poems by robyn x
Gods secret
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ROBYN ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! Well written ~ replete with Rhyme (mainly couplets ~ my fave) and Rhythm ! We all live on the same planet ~ BUT ~ for some Life is horrendous ~ full of strife & battle. In the end she did her best ~ we all do ! Who we are is God\'s gift to us (through our Parent\'s genes) what we make of ourselves is our Gift back to God (and our Parents). Life is always an uneven playing field ~ we are conceived EQUAL but born very UNEQUAL ! BUT ~ In Paradise (through the Curtain ?) we are all resurrected EQUAL ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for caring & sharing Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
April 8th, 2018 10:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ROBYN ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! Well written ~ replete with Rhyme (mainly couplets ~ my fave) and Rhythm ! We all live on the same planet ~ BUT ~ for some Life is horrendous ~ full of strife & battle. In the end she did her best ~ we all do ! Who we are is God\'s gift to us (through our Parent\'s genes) what we make of ourselves is our Gift back to God (and our Parents). Life is always an uneven playing field ~ we are conceived EQUAL but born very UNEQUAL ! BUT ~ In Paradise (through the Curtain ?) we are all resurrected EQUAL ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for caring & sharing Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
April 8th, 2018 10:15
