Comments received on poems by Jakey (minako)



never the same
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write.

November 27th, 2019 01:44

picture girl
SLR said:

You can feel her frustration that no-one seems to realize the truth of the situation. Very vivid descriptions.

May 16th, 2018 21:21

levels of life
swyndell said:

Well compose and brings on a great deal of thought. I do believe in line three you meant *ladder*?

JJ

May 14th, 2018 09:53

the voices
Lee Renard Caspian said:

I really love this! One thing is that you have a typo in the 8th line.

April 27th, 2018 00:02