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Fallen Angels
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Tears of an Angel
Tears of an Angel
Stop every clock
Stars are in shock
The river wont run to the sea
I won\'t let you fly !

Welcome ANGEL ~ thanks for first Poem
Love the Song ~ Love ANIMES !

I have met FALLEN ANGELS and I know
You are from above ~ because you are Helpers
And I promise never to take your wings !
The structure of you poem is very elegant
Three balanced sextets in rhyming couplets
And a great message ! Thanks for sharing
Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks

April 16th, 2018 06:58