Broken Paper Clips
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME ABBI ~ Thanks for your first poem on this site ! I have been writing poetry for over 16 years and (as you know) it is very cathartic and a release for our feelings ! This is n excellent \"free verse\" Poem because it has ~ Form (verses 4 4 4 4(+3) ~ Rhythm (meter) ~ Repetition \"upon my paper sheet skin\"
SKIN is our outer protection from cuts & scrapes & bruises & bacteria etc ! Without skin we would die ! Any form of \"self harm\" (bloodletting) is the ultimate \"cri de coeur\" or \"coup de grace\" and often (with TEENS) it is mutual

\"does the blade sing shallow
enough to swim grace on
your paper sheet skin \"

I work with Students 17 to 30 and I know that \"cutting\" is a real form of self expression and release for the frustration of Modern Society. Thanks for sharing ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.


April 19th, 2018 13:57