Comments received on poems by elizabethshadow
She Won\'t Wake Up
Ian Primmer said:
Your poem definitely reaches the objective of strumming the heart chords of those who have lost. Many people can relate to the loss and pain that you have relayed through your work. Nice work!
May 5th, 2018 18:50
Ian Primmer said:
Your poem definitely reaches the objective of strumming the heart chords of those who have lost. Many people can relate to the loss and pain that you have relayed through your work. Nice work!
May 5th, 2018 18:50
She Won\'t Wake Up
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ELIZABETH ~ Welcome to MPS ~ lots of NICE POETS and interesting POEMS ! Thanks for your first Poem ~ for your sake I am glad it is factional & not actual ! Because I am about twice your age so I have had experiences with FAMILY & FRIENDS where for a variety of reasons \"They won\'t wake up\" and it is very harrowing ! Depends on the age ~ we have all got to die sometime ~ but it is much harder if the one that overdosed is a TEEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing. It is a well written poem It has good rhyme and rhythm and repetition is important for emphasis in a POEM ~ well done ! The way MPS works is we comment on each others Poems and you can also build up a CIRCLE of MPS Friends ~ OK ~ Please check my POEMS ! Yours BRIAN (UK) I love Texas and I have an Uncle in AUSTIN ~ nice City !
May 5th, 2018 17:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ELIZABETH ~ Welcome to MPS ~ lots of NICE POETS and interesting POEMS ! Thanks for your first Poem ~ for your sake I am glad it is factional & not actual ! Because I am about twice your age so I have had experiences with FAMILY & FRIENDS where for a variety of reasons \"They won\'t wake up\" and it is very harrowing ! Depends on the age ~ we have all got to die sometime ~ but it is much harder if the one that overdosed is a TEEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing. It is a well written poem It has good rhyme and rhythm and repetition is important for emphasis in a POEM ~ well done ! The way MPS works is we comment on each others Poems and you can also build up a CIRCLE of MPS Friends ~ OK ~ Please check my POEMS ! Yours BRIAN (UK) I love Texas and I have an Uncle in AUSTIN ~ nice City !
May 5th, 2018 17:12
